Finally the day that you have been waited for it's princess luna with her brand new holiday dress which i called star festival her type of dress is aurora sky way while princess celestia from older version [link] wears the bright star
The first thing I would like to do is point out the positives in this vector. The color choice for Princess Luna is show accurate and the dress color choice and design is impeccable. The blush is also well done.
Just looking at this I can see the method you used to make this. I'm sorry to say that this technique will simply not yield you consistently smooth lines or or lines of uniform thickness. I would highly recommend you follow this tutorial to fully grasp the theories and concepts behind making a good, clean vector. [link]
The tip of the ear and horn should be rounded as well as the strokes that make the outline of the hooves.
I also see several fill errors and things in general that you might want to consider fixing. I have illustrated them here: [link]
Well i am sorry to say this but it is been copyrighted by the bronyagency watermark well it is unauthrized to use it unless there is a successful update i was trying to say that it is really a good offer but i am afraid not which means NO so sorry
Just looking at this I can see the method you used to make this. I'm sorry to say that this technique will simply not yield you consistently smooth lines or or lines of uniform thickness. I would highly recommend you follow this tutorial to fully grasp the theories and concepts behind making a good, clean vector. [link]
The tip of the ear and horn should be rounded as well as the strokes that make the outline of the hooves.
I also see several fill errors and things in general that you might want to consider fixing. I have illustrated them here: [link]
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